We have been working on a show don't tell piece of writing and the reader has to guess where we went.
See if you can guess where I went in the holidays from this piece of writing.
I went to a city over the hills and we went in a big building inside it i could see kids all over the place and i could hear kids screaming. And there were heaps of inflatable stuff. There was thing where you had to go through obstacle and then go down the slide. That was inflatable. And there climb up and then jump down onto a cushioned target another one where you. And the next one we went to was this blown up cushion and you would jump on to and you could make other people go up. And then there was this big circle and there were big blow up stick things.
Hi Damon
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